Story Notes

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Mmmmmm, I dunno. I'm looking back at at the first book and thinking, yeah. The pilots had yellow eyes, the infantry had orange and the designers had blue eyes. I should change that so the pilots had purple eyes, the infantry had green, and the designers orange eyes.

Looking at it, it means the pilots and infantry will have an easier time integrating with human society. There were only three designers, and two have stuck it out with the Shipping Authority. One wears contacts all the time to cut down the light, so she can have any colored eye she wants. And even then, the designers weren't trichromats, so they have unusual eyes as is.

I have to work on this.

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I dunno. I completely did not notice any of those details as they didn't seem to have any baring on the plot/story.