Jun. 8th, 2011

lolotehe: OWA (One Woman Army)
I realized that there are two scenes I simply have to delete from "White"; both involve Evie in the engine control room. They're the only two sequences in the entire book that are not in Becca's presence, and there's no justification for it.

Also, I think they're kinda weak. If you must, they are the first and last scenes in this radio-play adaptation I did. Sure, that last sequence is very exiting, but I need to work out a better way of handling it.

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